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Will G.'s avatar

Love this!

Jordan Vale's avatar

Thanks Will!

Bridget Lynch's avatar

I agree, all the characters are relatable at some point in my own journey.

Thanks, Jordan! Once again leaving me intrigued and asking more questions 😁

Jordan Vale's avatar

Appreciate that!

Christian Donabie's avatar

A quick question here based on geography from your story. Are you based in NYC currently?

I was raised in Westchester Cty and your reference to Grand Central brought me back to Amtrak and subways and hanging out in Manhattan/Bronx…

Jordan Vale's avatar

I am not, I am actually based in Florida. We were just in NYC a couple months ago. I originally started the story in a city in Florida, but it wasn’t working.

Christian Donabie's avatar

Ah I see. The story flows well. Can't imagine the setting being a city in Florida for that exchange. Well done for pivoting.

Christian Donabie's avatar

This is such a detailed, simple story of faith and logic. I can relate to trench coat man, cigarette man and the onlooker.

Jordan Vale's avatar

Thanks for sharing!